Friday, 10 January 2014

Sojourn In Love











I had left her alone when she announced the reason of their divorce. I couldn't take that she was in love with some other man. But I love her equally like she had loved me right since the days when I was in her womb, and so I am back; I couldn't stay away from her. I called her but I heard back my own voice instead. I pushed her, she didn't move-- I knew I was late.



This post is a part of Write Over The Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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17 comments:

  1. Anita Sabat10 January 2014 at 04:42

    Such a touching story, Preeti. Brought tears...

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    1. BloggerWlogger10 January 2014 at 08:18

      Thank you so much, Anita. These kind words are my inspiration. Welcome to my blog! :)

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  2. Prajosh Vijayan10 January 2014 at 05:08

    :( looking forward for some nice ending stories.. at least in fiction i expect .. in life its a mess..!

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    1. BloggerWlogger10 January 2014 at 08:20

      Yes of course, I will. As I have always tend to write sarcastic and funny posts, I thought of trying something different. I hope I have succeeded. Thanks for dropping by. :)

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  3. Arvind Passey10 January 2014 at 05:57

    Love, broken hearts, chaos, and disorientation... why do they tend to travel together?

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. BloggerWlogger10 January 2014 at 08:24

      May be it is the order of Nature, sir. We would never have known the meaning of Love if we haven't come across broken hearts and disorientation! Nature tends to balance a great deal, I guess. :)
      And thanks for dropping by, sir. Do visit again. :)

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  4. Soumya10 January 2014 at 06:13

    Oh! Beautiful :)

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  5. Surbhi Bafna13 January 2014 at 03:50

    Aww... child and a mom are bonded so strong that any other love couldn't diminish this love.
    Kudos!!!

    Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

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    1. BloggerWlogger13 January 2014 at 22:28

      Yes absolutely, Surbhi. The relation of a mother and her child is a totally different one. Nothing can match that. Thank you for dropping by, dear! :)

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  6. Anonymous14 January 2014 at 00:26

    Beautifully expressed...kudos!

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  7. Red Handed14 January 2014 at 23:16

    I am a bit depressed right nw reading this.
    So much pain!

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    1. BloggerWlogger15 January 2014 at 02:53

      The thought of losing own mother makes the whole thing depressing, nah??

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  8. BloggerWlogger15 January 2014 at 22:35

    Thanks Ashwini.! Its really a tough thing!

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  9. Amrita Sabat4 February 2014 at 09:41

    Wow...touching post...

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